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If you were gone, the sun would die.
If you were gone, the moon would cry.
If you were gone, the stars would weep.
If you were gone, the pain would be deep.
In this world of mine.

If you were gone, my heart would die.
If you were gone, my soul would cry.
If you were gone, I would weep.
If you were gone, my pain would be deep.
In this world of mine.

If you were gone, the water would vanish.
If you were gone, the air would be banished.
If you were gone, the light would cease.
If you were gone, there would be no peace.
In this world of mine.

If you were gone, my emotions would vanish.
If you were gone, my soul would be banished.
If you were gone, my joy would cease.
If you were gone, I’d have no peace.
In this world of mine.

If you were gone, the darkness would rule.
If you were gone, the hells would cool.
If you were gone, the heavens would burst.
If you were gone, the Earth would be cursed.
In this world of mine.

If you were gone, my darkness would rule.
If you were gone, my hell would cool.
If you were gone, my heaven would burst.
And if you were gone, my spirit would be cursed.
In this world of mine.

So don't you die on me...
©2007-2009 ~Invader-Von
:iconinvader-von:

Author's Comments

I just wrote this.

This is to all I care about. My family, my friends.
If you were gone, how would I survive?

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:iconkaeluna:
I like it. Really nice.

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If one jackass is too stubborn to "plow" you hard
You move on to the stallions
:iconinvader-von:
Thanks.

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I noticed that most people who say "Sorry for my English," in their siggies are better at speaking English than most people who have spoken English their entire lives.
:iconnikku772:
Very nice. Keep up the good work. ^_^

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One can use a sword to disrobe their lovers,
But my pen can just as easily disrobe my lover,
If not easier.
:iconinvader-von:
Thanks ^^

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[link] <-- Wonderful

I noticed that most people who say "Sorry for my English," in their siggies are better at speaking English than most people who have spoken English their entire lives.
:iconlunalove101:
Wow... So beautiful... :)
I love how you put so much emotion in this poem... :+fav:
Just lovely. :heart:

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:ohnoes: SPARKLES ARE FOR EDWARDS.

See? Now it's like a sterotype. Where goths have black, preps have pink, and Edwards have sparkles. :la: Now if only cheese would sparkle. Then Edwards would have something to relate with. Smelly and sparkly. :l
:iconinvader-von:
Thank you ^^

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[link] <-- Wonderful

I noticed that most people who say "Sorry for my English," in their siggies are better at speaking English than most people who have spoken English their entire lives.
:iconinvader-von:
Thanks

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[link] <-- Wonderful

I noticed that most people who say "Sorry for my English," in their siggies are better at speaking English than most people who have spoken English their entire lives.
:iconjineudo:
love it

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